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This is my diary. Can you help me find grammatical mistakes and delete superfluous words?
Today, I have had a happy day, it’s because of table tennis. Firstly, table tennis is my favorite sport. However, I always didn’t have a chance to play this. About five years later, I finally had this chance.
When I was about eleven years old, I had started to touch this sport. Although I’m not master now, when I was playing this with my classmate, I would felt very happy. In fact, I haven’t done exercise for a long time, so I ‘m looked like a fat boy. Recently, I hope to keep myself fit. However, I really don’t have some free time and a stability to reach this goal.
Besides, I really like eating so much. When I was a child, a balsam pear had been a food I dislike. However, it‘s my favorite now. So, if you ask me which food I dislike, I won’t be able to answer you. I must give up this bad habit, otherwise, I will be a fat boy forever.
Today, I’ve had a happy day because of table tennis. First of all, table tennis is my favorite sport. I never have a chance to play this until about five years later. (question: five years after what?)
When I was about eleven years old, I started to get used to this sport. Although I’m not a master, I feel very happy whenever I play with my classmate. However, I haven’t exercised for a long time, so I look like a fat boy. I hope to keep myself fit now. However, I don’t have enough free time and enough stability to reach this goal.
Besides, I like eating so much. When I was a child, I disliked balsam pears, but it‘s my favorite food now. If you ask me which foods I dislike, I won’t be able to answer you. I must give up this bad habit or I will be a fat boy forever.
Table tennis master class points